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Have you seen a wolf cry, tears streaming down it’s muzzle?
Showing weakness for once in life; not able to handle it’s puzzle.
Unable to howl its sorrow to the world, cant find words at all.
Watch gently if you wish as you see this great beast fall.

Have you seen a wolf silenced, blinded by its own pain?
Shamed for hurting another; it hangs its head again
Cant even whisper ‘sorry’ for the words just do not flow.
Watch if you must with sorrow as he turns and decides to go.

Have you seen a wolf hide, disappearing right from sight?
Never wanting to see one and just to escape into the night
Hanging low, cannot stand tall. The once there is gone.
Watch on with bewilderment at the wolf that once shon.

Have you seen a wolf plead, gentle tones so soft?
He gently gives a saddened sigh and the wind subtly coughs.
No longer wanting to live; wanting not to be alive.
Watch if you can with grief as the wolf loses will to survive.

Have you seen a wolf die, from sadness just suddenly fall?
Its life it gladly does give and no longer standing tall.
This great beast fell as normal; went as it desired to.
Could you watch on with regret as this beast falls and passes through?

Can you hear the wolf’s cry still carried on the wind?
Hear it still plead softly to be forgiven for it sinned.
It is too late to go back now, time has taken toll.
You should have heard the cry, before that great beast fell.
The wolf relates to my wolf soul inside.....
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GoldmoonDance Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The words and ideas flow very smoothly and you were able to put emotions to the actions a wolf does effectively. 
This is very beautiful.
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Xander-White-Wolf Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thank you so much. I appreciate the most wonderful comment. I am always striving to better my writing.
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little-wolf-child Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
wow deep again....
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Xander-White-Wolf Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
^^; well, thank you
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little-wolf-child Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
yup
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Xander-White-Wolf Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I am sorry if it sounds.....off. it is hard to describe my feelings into a wolf
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little-wolf-child Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
it doesn't honest it's amazing actually.
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Xander-White-Wolf Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
how is it amazing?
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little-wolf-child Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
you ask allot of questions.


I like how you use the detail and the way you go from one part to the next and it just sounds SO GOOD!
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Xander-White-Wolf Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Traditional Artist

I am sorry ^^ I cant help it.

and thanks ^^ I appreciate it

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